hmpf

is still all about vegetables, btw. I've covered radishes, potatoes, an unspecified casserole, and rhubarb now. Can't really say I expected the story to take this turn...

I've scrapped the bit of progress I made recently, though. It was mostly a rambly monologue and that's not really something that fits the overall concept of the story. I'm struggling with the replacement, though - dialogue not being my forte... It needs to be dialogue, though. I have a sort of vague idea of the main points it's supposed to cover, and the main... mode of dialogue it'll be, but it's refusing to come together properly. Grrr arrrgh.