Sadly, still unable to fix some fairly bad rhythm/scansion problems. There's some paragraphs in that story that I just don't know what to do with, rhythm-wise. Grrrrr.
Sorry I keep using the same icon, btw. I only have six icons, and the only other LoM icon among them is my "I hate 2.08" icon, which isn't appropriate here.
Actually, just for variety's sake, I think I'm going to use it here anyway, though.
Approaching six and a half pages now, btw.
Sorry I keep using the same icon, btw. I only have six icons, and the only other LoM icon among them is my "I hate 2.08" icon, which isn't appropriate here.
Actually, just for variety's sake, I think I'm going to use it here anyway, though.